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 From this fanfic: http://noraehaeyo.livejournal.com/31041.html#cutid
I never read fanfics within a few days of when they are posted, then I feel lonely posting so late. :(
Therefore I'm posting my feelings here. Obvious yaoi moments aside:

"Key doesn't show up the next day and nobody's really sure why. Taemin hypothesizes that he might be nursing a hangover, until Minho points out that Jonghyun drank more than Key did and he's remarkably vertical—Jonghyun's not sure if that's a compliment or not, so he chooses to ignore it, instead staring broodingly at the water and digging his toes viciously into the sand."
Jjong and Key are nursing burgeoning feelings for each other, and aren't really sure how to act around each other. Minho just points out obnoxiously that Jjong is short. Just to be obnoxious to the obnoxious shorty. xDDD

That shorty once said:
"But feel free to join our club for people who want to major in unemployment," Jonghyun contributes helpfully, earning himself a smack on the leg from Taemin and a look from Key that he's not sure whether to interpret as irritation or amusement. Probably both. "I hear it's a lucrative profession these days."
cuz they're studying the arts xDD

"Onew, ever the voice of reason..." Yay Onew's even more my type now (:


"Some of us," Key says in an incredibly dignified and snooty voice, "have obligations. Like jobs. A foreign concept to someone who's majoring in unemployment, I'm sure." The Key burn. The worst of the worst. LMAO.

"They spend that night on the beach in sleeping bags—even Key, though he'd required some cajoling and a trip home to get supplies. "I'm counting this as a victory," Jonghyun had informed him, and Key had quipped something about not even realizing they were fighting before booking it up the beach. Jonghyun, left standing in his wake, realized with a start that he liked this Key better, the snarky, sarcastic, subtly mocking but always with a sense of real amusement version that had emerged once they'd brought him out of his shell. It would have been so much easier if the opposite had been true."
I gotta admit. Those types get me more as well. xD

"'Are you going to talk to him?' Onew asks, before Key returns.
'I don't know,' Jonghyun says, shaking his head. 'I'm trying not to sweat it.'
Onew nods and leaves it at that, a small mercy for which Jonghyun is thankful—he isn't good under pressure, even well-intentioned pressure from his friends.Pressure makes him crack, little hairline fractures until he fucks up everything he's trying for—it's just kind of a habit, or a self-fulfilling prophecy. Either way, he's glad Onew left it alone."
Same. I can't act under pressure. It sucks. Gah.


"A lot of things," he says, staring up at the sky. "The city. The not-city." Key's quiet, apparently waiting for elaboration, and after a second Jonghyun sighs and continues. "It's nice out here," he says, which is an understatement, but there aren't really words in his vocabulary to explain how he feels about the sea. "It's… unhurried. Everybody in Seoul is always going somewhere fast, which is great if you're going somewhere fast too, but if you're not it's—"
"Exhausting?" Key finishes.
"Yeah, exactly. Sometimes I think, like, I got to this point of my life by blinking. I didn't really think about it, just did whatever everybody else was doing—good little robot, you know. And now I have to make all these choices for myself and I'm totally underequipped." Jonghyun draws himself up short, suddenly aware that he's been spilling his soul to a boy who's basically a stranger, but Key doesn't seem bothered—just contemplative, still propped up on one hand and still watching.
 I'm not changing double quotes to single quotes and double-quoting the whole thing anymore. It takes too long. Anyways, this is how I feel. School is such a mad rush, especially right before finals. If life is like this, I would really like to take a step back and have some time for myself. >.>

That night, when Onew and Minho and Taemin are asleep curled in their sleeping bags, Key rolls onto his side and props his head up on one hand and whispers, "You're not asleep, are you."
"How did you know?" Jonghyun asks.
"Your insomnia is loud," Key replies. It doesn't make any sense, but it's probably two in the morning and Jonghyun's not quite awake enough to question it, so he just says "Oh" and then falls silent. "What are you thinking about?" Key asks after a second, still watching Jonghyun in the dark.You, Jonghyun thinks.
Angst (not mine, of others), is such a thriller to me. Ohmigoodness.

"What?" he asks, perhaps a bit more sharply than he means to—Jonghyun's never really been a morning person, and one in the morning counts.
LOL ME TOO. I think I'm more jjong-like in terms of work habits/personality, though I like Onew-type people more. Wow opposites attract. I guess it's like, everything I wish I have, but I don't have.

"Onew hyung said you had something to talk to me about," Key says, shrugging one shoulder. "I just got off work, I didn't know you'd be asleep so early."

"Early?" Jonghyun splutters for a second, then subsides, because one in the morning is actually kind of early for a twenty-year-old in the prime of his staying-up-until-absurd-hours youth. "Okay," he says, and then processes the rest of the sentence—"Wait, Onew told you what?"
Heck yes. I stay up to random hours, then sleep till like noon, and wake up tired. Yes, why you ask? Cuz I slept at 5 AM. I've only been asleep for 7 hrs. xD